Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
For some customers, it is very important to see the advertisement because they can get advice whether they buy things or not. Since the main purpose of advertisement is to sell the products, however, the advertisers often overstate the information of the products. They sometimes encourage us to buy things that are not needed at all. So, I couldn’t agree with it more that the advertising is not useful.
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에세이 하나씩 쓰려니까 시간도 걸리고 해서..
Intro.Body.Conclusion. 나눠서 터득하는 방법을 택했습니다-_-
조언 감사히 받겠습니다. 부분부분 고쳐주셔도 되지만
아예 인트로 하나를 통째로 올려주시면 더 좋겠죠! 너무 염치없는건가??ㅎ
토플러 화이팅.