0054 (AD) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One should never judge a person by external appearances. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
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Nowadays, many people want to be handsome and pretty because they think their external appearances affect their future success. So, they even take plastic surgery. Also, some people think that external appearance is very helpful to judge one's personality. However, I think people should never judge a person by external appearances. They should know there is more important value than external beauty. To begin with, there are many cases that a person’s personality is totally different from his or her looking. Mostly, it is easy to determine one’s personality by his or her external appearance. However, we know that various characters that have different personality from their appearances. For example, the Queen in Snow-white and seven dwarves has very beautiful appearance but her inner personality is rotten and wants to kill her daughter. And we sometimes see criminals on TV news who have good looking. So, if we keep judging people with their external appearances, we might make serious problems someday. On top of that, there are many people having bad appearance but make great successes. As I mentioned above, many young people eager to change their looking even by surgery because they believe that external appearances help their future career. However, I think external beauty is nothing to do with the success if one keeps making efforts on their career. Napoleon, one of the most famous people in history, was very short person and did not have good looking. However, he was respected by many people all over the world as great military and political leader. No one considers his bad appearance when he or she says about Napoleon.
To sum up, many people think external beauty is most important, nowadays. However, we know there are many people who have perfectly different personality from their external appearances and there are many people who have bad appearances but achieve success. We all should know that inner personality is far more important than external appearance.
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