topic 19.
정부가 길과 도로의 개선에 투자 vs 버스나 기차, 지하철과 같은 대중교통 개선
Some people think that government should spend more money on improving roads and highways, while others think that government should more money on improving public transportation. It would be interesting issue which choice is better. Both choices each have their own advantages in some respects. As for me, however, I prefer that government must spent more money on improving public transportation. I will present briefly two reasons for my opinion/idea.
First, the government should spend more money on public transportation because it will result in a better quality of life for citizens. To put it again, if public transportation is investing by the government, many citizens could live better life in this modern society. what is more, If people use public transportation instead of cars, this will ease traffic conditions and save wasteful energy which are many natural source such as gas, petroleum. According to a recent survey conducted by "British Human Research Institute", compared with citizens who have not a developed transportation, those who have a convenient public transportation are greatly higher happiness degree, other conditions being equal. In this sense, there is no doubt that investing on public transportation is advantageous in terms of a better quality of life for citizens.
Second, If a public transportation system is improving, it would be more easy that people get around. in other words, investing a public transportation could provide people to more chances to ease moving. Transportation is an important asset/factor to live in this society. To take one of my cousins Jason as an example, even though he could not drive a car because of too much young, he need not waste many times for going to school and can go where he wants to go in the neighborhood whenever. Had it not been for spend more money on public transportation, he could not have eased to move around. In fact, it is not difficult to hear or see the similar cases around us. In this regard, it is needless to say that investing in public transportation help people to move conveniently.
All things considered, although it is not a black-or-white issue whether government should invest in public transportation or road and highways, I strongly prefer that investing in public transportation is better. That is because by spending more money on public transportation, people can live better life and easy to get around. These merits seem to make more and more governments try to invest in public transportation.
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그리고 public transportaion 는 왜이렇게 반복됐는지.
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