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The best way to relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.( Agree or Disagree?) |
There are many ongoing debate on how to take a rest and relive a stress. Many people believe that spending time alone is best way for reiliving stress because it is essential for everybody to have their own private time. On the other hand, some people emphasize the idea for doing some activity with others is better to relive stress and relax. Both opinions make sense, however, my opinion is that spending time with other people is better due to two reasons.
First, it is crucial for every people to have a relationship with others because it is natural instinct for every animal. For example, some scientists conducted a experiment with rats and estimated their stress level. And the experiment revealed that the rat which was isolated in the cage alone had high level of stress-realated hormon compair to rats raised in groups. In this manner, deprivation of fellow is a stress factor for animal and human being are not an exception.
Second, people can not releve their stress without having some activities with other people. The spirit of cooperation is easily obtained by playing sports and playing games and cooperation provides comfortness which can be a important factor in realeving stress.For instance, I usually play basket ball with my friends when I have free time and it helps me to relive my stress. When I play basketball alone, it is hard for me to feel that I am relaxed because of lack of cooperation. Likewise, having relationship with others is important for someone to relieve their stress.
To sum up, I strongly disagree with the idea that spending time alone is appropriate method for relax and to cope with stress. The reason for this idea is that doing activities with other people is necessary to relive stress and it is all animals' common instint for feeling comfortable when they are with others. |