■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic : The Internet has greater influence on human society than television does |
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▶ Your Answer : Some people think that television has greater effect on human society. However, in my opinion, It is better to Internet than television. There are several reasons and examples as follows. First of all, People can accessible to Internet anywhere. I mean, Internet is more portable. People can't bring TV when we go outside. If they take smartphone or laptop, they can use Internet anywhere. For example, I always search a route through Internet when I go to first place. One day, during my travel in foreign country, I arrived on late night. Losing my way is so dangerous because i'm a stranger. As I have smartphone, I can access Internet and find the route. Withought Internet, I would not have been able to go correct way. Second, Internet has more enormous sum of information than TV. When people watch TV, TV shows us only current information such as today's news or today's drama. Sometimes We can see past drama or movie in TV but those are not that our choice. People can pick information which one they need. This is more infortant when doing research. In my writing course, I had to do research about how analogue things effect on current things. I could collect a lot of concerned information by using Internet. And Most of this information was past research conclusion or news. It is possible to gather specialized information in Internet easily. In this regard, I firmly believe that Internet has more tremendous influence on human life than television does.
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