11/3 후기 : The one who do not work because he has enough money rarely happy. |
In society, many people usually have more than one job. The main purpose of having a job is to earn money for their lives. Therefore, some people who have huge sums of money do not have to work because they already have enough money. When it comes to the happy, some people think that the people who do not have work are not able to feel happy. On the other hand, other people believe that whether having a job or not is not related to happy. When I consider the relation between happy and having job, I think that job does not conclude one's happy. First of all, happy is people's feeling. It is easily changable like other emotion. I know many people who are happy even though they do not have enough money. According to a research conducted at New York University in 2007, more than 80 percent of the respondents who are living in the subway replied that even although they are not able to do anything they want, they feel happy because nothing bother them. On the other hand, I read a shocking news from a newspaper article, one of the popular actors who has a large number of money in Korea committed suicide. His friend said that he suffered from depression for a long time. From these example, l am able to conclude that money is not important when people feel happy. On top of that, the job is not firmly related with happy. I know many people who suffer from extreme stress when they deal with their task. Even though the president who are operating a big company always suffered from stress as much as other minor clerks. On the other hand, some people are able to feel more happy from their job because they are able to feel a sense of achievement while they deal with their task. According to a research conducted at 2008, more than 80 percent of the respondents who are having job replied that they do not happy with their job and they want to resign from their jobs. It is evident that job does not make happy for people regardless of their salaries. |
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