It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city |
People have their own idea about whether children should live in the country or not. Although some people may think that because of good environment – like fresh air, clear river and soil and so on – living of country is better than city’s living to children, I strongly believe that city can more help to them in many ways. Because there are everything that children want in city. A big city has many facilities for children. By using them, children can experience various cultures and learn about many things. As we know, there are appearing many institutions for them in countryside, but the number is so low and the quality is not good. Besides, there are little children, so the facilities are not almost used. In real, the schools for children in countryside -like elementary school, middle school and high school – they are abolished because of a lack of students. Therefore, these phenomenons can affect badly to develop of children. However, in a big city is not. For example, COEX in In a big city, children get along with many people. Of course, there are many people in country, they almost work as farmer. However, there are many various people who are different from farmer, like teacher, singer, and writer and so on. Because of this, children can meet various people and learn new things. For instance, when the children meet the teacher, they can learn about way of study and when they meet the artist, they can experience taking a picture. By experiencing many activities, they can increase their creativity and have high level eyes. This is another way why I prefer the children’s living of city. |
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