Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. |
First, destructing environment is common in both developed and developing countries. In developed countries, they already achieved their purpose in terms of developing. Now they are interested in recreational lives and sometimes destroy it. For example, people may enjoy golf as hobby. They make golf-links to do it. Developing countries are not in the same situation as such countries but they are similar in destructing environment. They need money and more field. So they cannot help destructing environment. For example, they need factories to develop. They destruct fields to build those factories. In this point of view, the Earth is damaged by human all over the world. Moreover, some activities pollute the environment directly. There are air pollution, soil pollution, water pollution and so on. Such terms come from human activities. For example, human need factories so they build it. Smoke from them causes air pollution. Also, waste from factories brings about soil pollution. In addition, waste water from them induces water pollution in lake, sea and so forth. In this point of view, other factors as well as factories harm the Earth. In conclusion, human activity harms a lot the Earth. All over the world cannot but destruct environment for some reasons. Also, human activities pollute the Earth in many ways. Therefore, I claim that human activities damage the Earth considerably. |
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