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In modern society, it has been controversial whether or not children should begin formal education when being very young. However, I basically disagree with the position that nations have youths early start their public education. This is because it may negatively affect children`s creative power as well as budget of nation. I will illustrate these reasons more in detail from now on.
Most of all, the policy would have a detrimental influence on creative ability of youths. Generally, most formal training is opperesive and enforces children to absorb fixed knowledge. More over, the period of youth is extremely important for developing thinking power. Accodingly, earlier formal education may confine their creative power. For example, The IQ test implemented by K-m brain research institution indicates that children offered earlier public training score a low point in creative measurement section campared to usual youths. From this information, I conclude that the policy is major factor which could reduce creative thinking.
In addition, earlier formal education causes nations to spend more money on total education systems. As a matter of fact, it is inevitable for the policy to requires much equipment and facility. In other word, there are more requirements such as building new schools or publishing new public books for youths so that more people receive public education. as a result, goverments may have a burden to expend more cost in the policy. For instance, I read that public education experts " Kim ho joon" estimates in 2015, the korea goverment`s expenditures related to education facility for youths will increase in 22.5% compared to spending in now, so I am sure the earlier public education policy can triggers fatal shock to budget of nations.
In a fact, just as english poverb goes "a coin has two sides" , there might be some problem not to do earlier public education. In contrast, I believe that we can find out better solutions of the issues by considering to prevent nations from executing the earlier public education. This is because it may negatively affect children`s creative power as well as budget of nation. I will illustrate these reasons more in detail from now on.
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