Topic : Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed children's ability to read. |
Nobody might not be able to deny that TV has been taken a large part in our society since its advent. It would not be possible to live without TV in our lives involving from kids to adults. On the other hands, the effect from TV definitely affects kids' lives the most for some reasons: making them addicted on TV, decreasing the number of change to develop thought process, imagination, and opportunity to read as well.
On the top of that, Watching TV could bring out the negative effect to child in an aspect of being addicted watching it without any consciousness. I strongly believe that this is the most serious problem to not only kids who never concerned about but their parents, actually, worrying about the most. As I mentioned above, the matter is that TV is able to make people, especially child, keep watching its program to which quiet seems like attractive. They do not realize how long they have been watching without any thought. From my experience, I once watched TV during whole day, and also I did not do anything, even move any distance while watching it. Finally, I could realize that I just continue watching during a day when my mom was returned and blamed me for what I had been keeping on. As you can see, TV is such a magician making people keeping sitting in front of them for a long time without performing nothing, especially, it effects to children who can not easily figure out what they are doing.
Another side-effect of watching TV is that children might not develop and improve their thought gaining from reading. As a matter of fact, the main problem is that knowledge gained by watching on TV restrain children's ability to imaginate what they get motivated from the book in their brain. That is because receiving information by TV is more comfortable. It does not need more consideration which may be the most important subject to kids. Children are able to improve their ingenuous thought from drawing pictures and imagination about specific subject in their minds. Contrastly, the TV is in opposed direction offering the result already before considering. This factor might lessen chances to develop children's thought process, one of important abilities in their lives.
The other serious effect coming from TV to kids is that children are only getting used to understand the subject from watching and listening. In other words, they are apt to avoid searching and reading about the information they desire. That is because they think the process gaining information from reading is tiresome and it does not provide more fun than watching and listening they accustomed to. I had been interested, for instance, in Korean history during the elementary school. In fact, I realized the reading a particular book written about history possessed more information than gaining it from watching TV. However, I hated searching and reading a book which contained my interests because I already got used to method, watching TV which was much easier to get in than reading. Thus, this habit had provided me less chance to read a book so that I was getting become to prefer watching TV to reading and searching any of article. 솔직히 이게 처음으로 시도한 에세이인데요...이렇게 하는거 맞나요? 롸이팅게시판에 글 올리는건 처음이예요..시험이 담달인데 처음 롸이팅 연습해보네요.. 시간은 첫 작품이라 30분 좀 더 걸렸구요...누군가 말했거든요 Body가 3개가 될때는 conclusion 안써도 된다고..그래서 안썼어요..시간도 없고... 여튼 이렇게 쓰는게 맞는지는 모르겠지만 첨삭 부탁드릴게요.. 근데 솔직히 써놓고도 잘 모르겠습니다....오랜만에 쓰는거라...자꾸 얘기가 빗나가는 듯한.. 여튼 첫 에세이니깐요 실수 많더라도 좋게 봐주시구 많은 질책 부탁드릴께요~^^; 좋은하루 되세요..^^ |