A teacher's ability to relate well with students is more important than the ability to give knowledge. |
As the generation changes, teachers teaching style changes to create better education to students. Among these styles, I believe getting along well with students is more important than the ability to give knowledge. It will help students to be interest in particular subject. Also, relation among students and teachers affects students' learning. To begin with, the ability to relate well with students aids students to gain interest in certain subject. As teachers become friendly with students and make jokes to create interesting class, it renders students to listen and pay attention to her lecture. Also, they can readily ask questions about the lecture as well as consult with teachers about their problems. In my experience, my English teacher was friendly to students, so she attempts to help students kindly when they seek help with their weakness in English. It was easy for me to go see her after school and asked her about the concept of writing analysis essay; she fully explains well and almost tutors me for free every time I went to her classroom. As a result, I could receive A in essays from her class and awards. Students' education easily influences by relationship between student and teacher. Although teacher graduated from one of top schools, students do not like teachers if they act arbitrary. Also, it dwindle their intention to learn that particular subject. For instance, I loved math because I found problems interesting. When new teacher, who do not care and act rudely to students, arrived in my school, I had really bad impression about him. Every time I tried to ask questions, he always ignored me and told me it is so simple problems, so I should solve by myself. Then, I started to lose interest in math. As a result, I do not like math anymore, and I do not even want to take math in high school. Overall, teachers' ability to relate well with students gain students' interest and affects them in academically. I firmly agree that it is more significant for teacher to relate with student amicably. The ability to relate well with students could smoothly improve teachers' abilities to teach.
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editing 하는데 좀 시간 들였어요... 아무래도 제가 고쳐야할건 고쳐야해서..
다 쓰고 시간이 걸리더라도 좀 섬세히 고쳤어요. (특히 내용.. 문법은.. 안 고쳤다-_-)
솔직히 이건 timed essay 라고 할 수는 없지만-_-
점점.. 노력해서 완벽한(?) 에세이를 써나갈게요..^^
첨삭 부탁드려요^^
아아아아, 맞다. intro 잘 쓰는 방법 뭐 있을까요?
도입 부분 쓸때.. 어떤 식으로 쓰는게 좋을까요?
그리고 conclu 에서 맨 마지막 문장은 어떤거 쓰는게 좋을까요?
물론 general 해야겠지만.. 힘드네요..ㅠㅠ 잘 쓰긴...