Childhood years are the most important years of a person’s life.???? |
It is a controversial topic that when is the meaningful period of during one’s lifetime. Some might say that childhood is the most valuable years because these make people homesick and revoke past happy time. However, I definitely argue that childhood is not the most influential stage since we learn a great amount of knowledge, which is far much essential in one’s life, in adolescent years. Moreover, most people meet their best friends after childhood. In the beginning, a great portion of elementary education is only the background for the high school’s lessons. As people get into teenage period, they learn about specific information and knowledge, which play an indispensable role to be successful in one’s life. To be more specific, in my country, In addition, life-long friends of most people are those who were familiar with each other after childhood. As a matter of fact, friends in childhood are easy to forgotten as time passed. On the other hands, those, who meet after getting aged, are apt to remain longer. To illustrate my personal example, I have five enduring friends that I can open my mind without any hesitation. By the way, I met two of them in my high school time, and rests are after graduation from high school. Although I had many friends in my childhood, I have got touch with no one of them now. Thus, childhood does not take a large part of one’s life. In summary, it is absolutely true that childhood is the most valuable age in a person’s life because, in that period, people do not learn about extremely critical things. What’s more, people mainly meet their lifetime friends not in that time. All in all, good memories in childhood are crucial, but rest of that time is more valuable. |
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