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The reading passage contends that a brain scan lie detector is more accurate than a conventional one. On the other hand, the lecturer brings up several points that contradict this argument to contradict such argument. First, the speaker argues that it is wrong to say that a brain scan lie detector never misidentify true statements as lies. This is because the The (this is because는 적절하지 않는 표현 입니다) same brain areas are activated both when people are holding information and when people are lying. In other words, when a person avoids a sensitive topic, the same brain regions which deal with telling lies can be activated. This casts doubt on the reading passage's claim that a brain scan lie detector do not misinterpret honest statements as lies. does not misinterpret honest statement as lies Second, according to the lecturer, it is untrue that results of a brain scan can be interpreted objectively. This is supported by the fact that every Every person shows different brain activities. Therefore, there are no standard rules that can be applied to everyone to be applied to everyone. As a result, a subjective analysis is needed even when analyzing the results of a brain scan, which means a great chance of making errors. This counters the reading passage's assertion that no subjective analysis is required when using a brain scan lie detector. The final point made by the lecturer is that it is more likely that people trick the test when using a brain scan lie detector. There are two reasons for this. First, people can arise complex feelings by solving difficult math problems, for instance. This increases brain activity and make it difficult to identify lies. Second, if people rehearse untruthful stories, a brain scan cannot find they are lying. This refutes the reading passage's argument that people hardly deceive a brain scan lie detectors.
점수: 22 리딩에 대한 정보가 많이 부족한 통합형 에세이입니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요한 부분을 차지하는 것은 한 주제에 대하여서 서로 다른 정보를 가지고 있는 리딩과 리스닝이 어떻게 비교하고 반박을 하는 것인지를 보는 것 입니다. 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우에 잇어서는 리딩에 대한 부분을 각 단락에서 한 문장으로만 서술하였는데. 한 문장으로 끝내는 것 보다는 리스닝을 좀 더 반박할 수 있는 부분들을 더 서술하시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셨습니다.
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