■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Your Answer :
The lecture points to the inaccuracies in
the ideas in the reading passage that there are three reasons that dinosaurs
were endotherms. Based on the reasons that scientists have
found in (전치사) the dinosaur fossils in the Polar Regions, the reading passage contends that
dinosaurs were endotherms. However, the lecture rejects this. The lecturer
points out that even though dinosaurs lived in the region the area of today is
warmer than the past, which means, in fact, endotherms do not live in the Polar
Regions. (문장이 너무 길어요. 끊어주세요.) Also, the speaker said supporting points that have something to do
with migrating to warmer area. (자세하게 설명해주세요. migrating to warmer area에 대하여 어떤 의견이 제시되었나요?) As a result, the reading’s reasons do (주어 동사 불일치) not
prove the opinion. On the basis of the perception that endotherms’
legs are positioned underneath its body, the passage argues that dinosaurs were
endotherms. However, the lectures raises doubts about this. The lectures
mentions that dinosaurs would not be endotherms. This is because the legs’
position is not for running and the legs’ position is to support large body of
dinosaurs.
The reading passage contends that dinosaurs’
bone structure is very similar with endotherms’ bone structure such as having canals
to grow quickly, so dinosaurs would be endotherms. However, the lecture disagrees (주어 동사 불일치) with this idea even though dinosaur bones do have canals. The reason is that the
lecturer explains that dinosaurs also have growth rings and the rings’
characteristic is not similar with that of endotherms. The growth rings indicate that dinosaurs do
not grow rapidly. She explains supporting points that stopped growing and
slowly growing during cooler periods.
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1. 각 문단 시작 전에 tab 버튼 눌러서 들여쓰기 해주세요.
2. introduction의 분량을 3문장 이상으로 늘려주세요.
3. reading and listening의 비율이 너무 listening쪽으로만 치우쳐져 있습니다.
비율은 5:5, 적어도 6:4 정도는 되어야 합니다.
이는 리딩에 대한 디테일 부족으로 이어지며, 분량 부족, 추가 설명 실패 등으로 이어질 수 있으니
리딩에서도 evidence를 많이 찾아서 써주시면 좋을 것 같습니다.
(전체적으로 바디가 많이 빈약한 편이니
최대한 문장 수를 늘리는 데 집중해주세요.)
수고하셨습니다. *^^*