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There is a controversial issue whether the extended family is not as
important as now than in the past
or not. After taking into consideration of the idea from several
perspectives, I side with the idea that large family is still important today
for two reasons. First, people could gain a good counselors. Second, people
would develop their social skills.
To begin with, people can have a
great adviser because elderly member of family already have been underwent many
problems and overcame its , so they have more wisdom that helps young people
solve their problems which they face. Especially, there are a lot of difficulties
and problems today, so young person needs good adviser. My experience could be a great example. When
upon graduation from university, I was depressed because of getting a job and
it was so stressful. Therefore confidence got lower, and I could not interact
with others. However, one day, I consulted with my uncle about this, and he
told me good advice and encouraged me. And then, I got a confidence and more
tried to get a job, so I got a great job opportunity. If I did not talk to him,
I would have gained the job.
On top of that, People would
develop their social skills because there are various age and personality in
the extended family. Thus a member of that family has more chance that deal with
many different situations than who does not live in extended family. Therefore
member of big family can more improve their capacity of solve the problems.
According to a study conducted by renowned research center, the 70 percents of
the participants agree that people can enhance social skills from extended
family.
To conclude, I strongly believe
that my standpoints of the two reasons are sufficiently convincing.
First a member of extended family could obtain a great counselor, and
second, large family helps people improve their social skills.
In this regard, I think that today, big family is as important as in the
past.
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