▶ Topic :To be financially responsible adult,
children should manage their own money at a young age.
People who grew up from diverse environment
would certainly maintain various understanding towards handling finance. While
a sizable number of populace might claim that children should not administer their
own cash to be a financially responsible adult, without shadow of doubt, such
notion needs to be seriously reconsidered. There are several reasons that could
validate this statement.
First and the foremost reason would be that
it is better to make errors mistakes (errors -> 기계 오류, mistakes -> 사람 실수) in managing money when they are still at young age.
It is not an overstatement to say that every human beings (주어 동사 일치, every 뒤에 명사는 무조건 단수) makes mistakes
throughout their his life, especially when they are new to experience things he experiences new things. This
can be best explained with a personal example of my friend named John who is
having some difficulties in his finance financial situation. John did not control manage his pocket money
properly when he was in high school, so he was always short of money, which was
not an issue with him since he could ask his dad for more. (문장이 너무 깁니다. which를 기준으로 끊어주세요.) However, he does not
live in the same circumstance as he was at young age. His spending habit is
very poor as expected, but this time his dad cannot help him like before.
Nevertheless, John is learning from his errors mistakes and starting to reduce his
expenditure. It is not hard to conceive that if he learnt these errors when he
was a child, he could have become a more financially responsible adult. (관사)
In addition, it is much easier to make a
financial habit in the childhood than the adulthood. It can be said that a person
with an excellent habit of managing money is a more financially responsible
adult. Once a child become an adult, one has to deal with numerous issues like applying for
jobs, marriage, feeding family, socializing, raising children and so on. and so on.
(동사가 있어야 issue가 무엇인지 알 수 있어요) Despite the fact that money is a very important subject to be handled, people
tend not to focus on this specific matter by saying that they have got more
vital issues to be resolved resolve (주어가 사람이니 능동태가 자연스럽습니다). On the other hand, children do not have as much
pressure as adults have and have much more free time to learn financial habit.
This habit would make one a better more financially responsible person once they
mature.
From the above assessments, the fact that
learning how to manage their one's own money at young age seems to be a far more convincing
reason for becoming a financially responsible adult. This is not only due to
the fact that it is better to learn from their financial mistakes (실수에서 교훈을 얻는거지 실수 자체를 배우는 것이 아니기 때문에 from이 들어가야만 합니다) at the young age,
but also that it is harder to learn financial habit in the adulthood.
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