▶ Your Answer :
Both the speaker and writer deal with the same
topic: dogs. But their perspective is different. In the reading passage, the
writer mentioned that dogs were trained by humans at past times as a hunting
companion tamed about 10,000 years ago and that they were trained in China.
First
and foremost, the writer claims that dogs evolved from wolves were tamed by
humans as hunting companions. Conversely, the speaker disagrees on the writer
and mentioned that the hunting style between dogs and wolves is different.
Moreover, it is extremely hard to train wolves so it is difficult to tame
wolves
Secondly,
the writer stated that by measuring the differences in DNAs, scientist discover
that domesticated dogs were found about 16,000 years ago while the lecturer
contradicts that a recent study has shown that footprint of a dog was found and
estimated that it was 26,000 years ago which made a doubt to the speaker
Finally,
according to the reading passage, the author mentioned that there are some
evidences that dogs were domesticated in China and began to spread out.
However, the professor contradicts such as Europe, North America and more plus,
there is an evidence that the DNA of China dogs and other dogs located around
the world have the same DNA which put refutes on the speakers
점수: 27 지적할 부분이 없는 통합형 에세이입니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요한 부분을 차지하는 것은 한 주제에 대하여서 서로 다른 정보를 가지고 있는 리딩과 리스닝이 어떻게 비교하고 반박을 하는 것인지를 보는 것 입니다. 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우에 있어서는 리딩이나 리스닝 둘 다 서로 구체적으로 자신의 주장을 잘 보여주고 잇습니다. 구체적 설명을 통하여서 주제에 대해 서로의 견해가 무엇인지를 잘 파악할 수 있었습니다. 수고많으셨습니다.
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