▶ Your Answer : The reading passage contends that scientists who study the global warming trend have identified several key contributing factors. On the other hand, the lecturer brings up several points that contradict this view. to contradict this view.
First, the lecturer points that the creation of landfills is not a significant contributor to the rise in global temperatures. It is true that waste buried in landfills produces methane, but recent study shows that methane is very little in greenhouse gas. This refutes the author's point that the creation of landfills is a significant contributor to the rise in global temperatures.
Moreover, in the lecture, the point is made that the cause of global warming is not deforestation, which is the harvesting of a large number of trees in a particular area. It is true that trees absorb carbon dioxide but also when tree is died and decay decayed (is뒤에는 수동태로 서술해야 합니다), carbon dioxide re-enter in the atmosphere. Also, it does not traps trap (does 뒤에는 동사 원형 입니다) heat. This casts doubts on the idea in the reading that the cause of global warming is deforestation, which is the harvesting of a large number of trees in a particular area.
The final point made by the lecturer is that the current global warming trend is not related to a naturally occurring cycle of climate change. This is because global Global (this is because는 적절한 표현이 아닙니다) warming depends on location not cycle. Some place is warm and other place is cool. Also, temperature of at Medieval Warm period is not lower than current. This is different from the passage's view that the current global warming trend is related to a naturally occurring cycle of climate change.
점수: 22 리딩에 대한 정보가 많이 부족한 통합형 에세이입니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요한 부분을 차지하는 것은 한 주제에 대하여서 서로 다른 정보를 가지고 있는 리딩과 리스닝이 어떻게 비교하고 반박을 하는 것인지를 보는 것 입니다. 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우는 한 단락에 리딩에 대한 부분이 한 문장으로만 서술되어있는데. 한 문장으로 끝내는 것 보다는 리스닝을 좀 더 반박할 수 있는 부분들을 더 서술하시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셨습니다.
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