▶ Your Answer : Whether students require
guidance on their life prospects and occupation in lieu of academic curriculum
is a matter of considerable debate. From my viewpoint, the teachers' cardinal
focus should be on academics rather than their students' occupations. This can
be substantiated by the following reasons.
First and foremost, the main function of teachers is to teach the students. It
is a commonplace that there is a separate personnel for career counselling and
guidance who are professionally trained to carry carry out their job.
Untrained, the teachers may perpetrate a folly of providing biased opinions on
the careers the students are to choose. To illustrate, my science teacher at my high school used to be overly proud of being
erudite on science. He accentuated the importance of being a scientist and
recommended that the students be scientists despite their talents. Even a
student who had dreamed of being a soccer player were was told to be scientist who can significantly
contribute to the humanity rather than a healthy clown whose sole
purpose is to merely entertain others. The career master was exasperated by the
ridiculous advice and suggested that he pursue his goals. The student now has
become a soccer player in the second division of English Premier League.
Secondly, however well-informed the students may be concerning their future,
they will be rendered incapable of getting the job unless they are equipped
with knowledge. Therefore, the teachers should focus on teaching the students
so as to follow lead them to follow their
careers as per their wish. For instance, my friend Koo used to be full of
specters about his future. Rather than concentrating on the lessons, he would
frequently question the perfect career choice. The teachers, after serious
speculation, advised him to be a biology professor since his main interest laid
in biology. However, Koo was unqualified for his biology course that he had
yearned as his marks were considerably lower than the requirement. Had he
mainly focused on his academics, such misery would never have been incurred.
In conclusion, I firmly believe academic guidance is the
overarching role of the teachers for the following reasons: First, there
are career masters who are experts at academics. Secondly, teachers should
bolster the students' capacity to teach their targets, which can be
accomplished through an intense academic training.
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