■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Your Answer :
The reading the passage asserts that the reasons for decreasing tendency for reading literature.
On the other hand, the lecturer brings about three opinions that contradict the
reading passage.
Firstly, the speaker
argues that other field books can also stimulate the reader's imagination. There
are many good books about science, politics and other fields. These books are
high quality so those can play a good role to encourage reader's thinking.
This casts doubt on the reading passage's contends that nothing cannot provide
the intellectual stimulation.
Second, the speaker claims that many other types of culture are not superficial. She said
that many music and movies are not lower levels. Also, the culture has changed, so (한 문장 안에 so나 and과 같은 연결어 없이 주어와 동사가 2개 이상 오지 못합니다) there
are many forms to indicate culture now. This counters the reading passage's
claim (단복수) that some books are superficial and other forms of things such as a novel, TV programs and so on are lowered.
Lastly, the
lecturer asserts that there is a problem for the writer, not only the readers.
She said that it is a fault for a writer about decreasing the reader of literature
as many writers tend to write difficult to understand. This refutes the reading
passage's content (품사) that the reason for the diminishing of reading literature is the
poor standards of today’s readers. |
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1. 각 문단 시작 전에 tab 버튼 눌러서 들여쓰기 해주세요.
2. 전체적으로 바디가 매우 짧은 편입니다.
최대한 많은 문장을 써주세요!
3. introduction의 분량을 3문장 이상으로 늘려주세요.
4. reading and listening의 비율이 너무 listening쪽으로만 치우쳐져 있습니다.
비율은 5:5, 적어도 6:4 정도는 되어야 합니다.
이는 리딩에 대한 디테일 부족으로 이어지며, 분량 부족, 추가 설명 실패 등으로 이어질 수 있으니
리딩에서도 evidence를 많이 찾아서 써주시면 좋을 것 같습니다.