■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic : Colleges and universities must do a better job preparing students for their workplace. Agree or Disagree |
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Some
people might argue that colleges and universities don’t need to help job preparing
students for their workplace. However, in my opinion, colleges and universities
must do a better job preparing students for their workplace. There are two reasons
why I think this way. First, colleges and universities have a lot of resources which
can help students get a job. Second, students can save money and time to prepare.
First of all, colleges and
universities can help students efficiently, because they have many know-hows. Nowadays,
it is harder and harder to get a job for students. Suppose that universities
and colleges only pursue achievements of studying. Would it be possible for
students to enter a company that they want to go without any help of school? I think
it is highly doubtful. Colleges and universities have a variety of experiences
and information that can be useful for students. For example, I know some senior
students in my university who got through a stressful time because of finding job.
They tried to find work, but it was not easy. If the university had not helped
them, they could not find a job. The university gave them a lot of information
and introduced them good companies to work. Thus, it is necessary that
university support students for getting a job using their knowledge.
Also, time and money can
be saved if universities and colleges help students. It needs lots of money and
time to prepare for job searching. Students should get certifications and make
experience like internship. Therefore, they have to spend much money and time. If
university support them, there will be less burden. For instance, my sister could
get a job without high cost, because her university helped her. The university offered
her an internship and scholarship, so she could focus on her job searching, finally
she entered a company she wants to go. As we can see, students can get a job
easily if universities and colleges support them to save money and time.
In brief, students need to be supported from their universities
and colleges. If they do so, students will not be afraid of getting a job anymore.
In this regard, I firmly believe that colleges and universities do a better job
preparing students for their workplace. |
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