▶ Your Answer :There are common 2 tactics for finishing his or her tasks. First one is gradually working on it a little bit but each day. The other one is working on my assignments intensively and finishing it in a short time. There are two reasons why I prefer the latter one.
First of all It can make me is efficient. When people are under circumstances that they have to do something in very short time, they get so have to be very efficient to meet the deadline. For example, As I’m a medical student now, my school doesn’t give me enough time to study and understand it well. I always had to study hard to get decent grades in limited time. Though It’s too harsh and tough, I was able to cram whole range of knowledge which I took in lectures in my head. After the test, I can complement something I missed or didn’t understand well.( example자체가 약간 맞지 않는 예였던 것 같습니다. 우선, 이 예를 쓰려면 시험을 잘 보기 위해 매일매일 어떻게 공부를 했는지, 체계적으로 계획을 잡았는지에 대하나, 몰아서 벼락치기를 하니 굉장히 힘들었다라는 이야기가 있어야 되는데 이에 대한 섦영이 약했던 것 같아 약간 아쉽습니다) Second reason is that I can spend my time on something I’m interested in saved by working on intensively. Everybody has its Everyone has their own hobbies or interests but we all need to make our time on purpose to enjoy them.(무슨 뜻인가요?) In my experience, I was a very efficient student so I managed to save time by studying medicine for school test in short time. During saved time, I used to could study other stuff especially physics and computer science. I really am sure that those variable knowledge will be used as basic tools for researching treatment for severe diseases. Taken together, Working on a huge assignment intensively is much better because it can allow me be more efficient makes me more efficient and I can do my own stuff after I finish my assignments. In this regard, I prefer to finish my assignments intensively.
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