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The
reading passage contends that congestion pricing has great benefits for three
reasons. However, the lecutrer brings up several points that contradict this
idea.
First,
the speaker points out that it is wrong to say that congestion pricing allows driving
to be safe. Congestion price reduce the volume of traffic, so cars run in much
more speed. The research shows that if the speed of cars increase, the coliision
of cars result in the much more severe accident. This refutes the reading
passage’s idea that much safer driving can be made by congestion pricing.
Second,
the lecturer argues that this system makes public transportaion more
inconvenient in the long term. What I learend in the lecture is that congestion
price allows more people to use public transportation system, but its capacity
can not increase in fast. As a result, it makes public trasit discomfort. This
counters the reading passage’s assertion that congestion price makes public
transprtation network more convenient to use.
The final
point made by the lecture is that the congestion price can negatively affect
the community businesses. It prevents people from driving, so people do not use
facilities or shops in the city. This casts doubt on the reading passage’s
argument that the system is good for businesses in the city.
점수: 22 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요하게 보는 것은 한 주제에 대하여서 서로 다른 정보를 가지고 있는 리딩과 리스닝이 어떻게 비교하고 반박을 하는 것인지를 보는 것 입니다. 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우는 리딩에 대한 정보 가 많이 부족합니다. 한 문장으로 리딩을 끝내는 것 보다는 리스닝을 좀 더 반박할 수 있는 부분들을 더 서술하시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셨습니다.
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