▶ Your Answer : In the reading passage, there is ample support for the author’s claim that genetically modified (full name 작성해주세요) crops have advantages for humans. However, the professor in the lecture gives several reasons as a rebuttal to the author’s point. First, the professor contends that genetically modified crops can be overstated to solve the issue of world hunger. There are enough food to eat for all around the world’s people. The problem is that the distribution of the food is not equal. Therefore, the problem of hunger will not settle, and the poor countries will still suffer from not having enough food. This casts doubt on the reading passage’s claim that the amount of the supply of the crop will increase, fixing the hunger issue. Plus, this can be fix the problem. Next, the professor insists that genetically modified crops’ cost more expensive than transitional ones. This is because that many agricultural companies spend tremendous money on inventing new genetically modified crops and these crops also need a large amount of water to grow. In this regard, all things make the cost of genetically modified crops become higher. This counters the reading passage’s assertion that genetically modified crops can withstand unfavorable weather, so they can be provided constantly, which allows the expense of food to be reduced as a result. Finally, the professor argues that vaccines that are made by genetically modified crops also have same problems to be stored and conveyed. This is because vaccines are made based on genetically modified tomatoes and bananas can go bad easily. so they have to be cool to preserve and carry. In addition, the vaccines cannot be used in all parts of the world. Thus, the developing counties cannot utilize this immediately. This refutes the reading passage’s suggestion that these can be produced more than ever, since the researchers recently invented eatable vaccines. Also, these vaccines can be saved and moved simply.
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