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Some people think that teenagers are more influenced by
anyone else than their friends. However, in my opinion, I strongly disagree this
above statement by following two reasons. First, friend can change the other’s personality.
Second, teenagers rely on their friend than family.
First, friend has a strong effect on teenager’s personality.
This is because teenagers are not fully mature. As a result, they are easily influenced
by others than adult. For example, when I was a middle school student, I was a
shy girl. So it was hard to communicate with other people. After entering the
high school, I met a friend whose name is Kim. She was the most outgoing person
I ever met. We could easily get close because of her personality. Besides, I was
influenced by her personality, I had started to change mine in a good way. Thanks
to her, I do not have any trouble with talking with strangers until these days.
Second, teenagers usually rely on their friend than family. This
is because that they spend the majority of their time with friends than family
due to school. Therefore, sometimes friends know each other well than their
parents. For example, when I was a high school student, I spent time with my
friends from morning to evening because of preparing college entrance test. So
we knew everything about each other. The good thing was I had my side if I had
a trouble something. They could fully understand about me and they gave me good
advice. However if I told to my parents, they did not understand why I thought
like this. So with friends was great encouragement during my teenage period.
To sum up, teenagers have a significant impact on their personality
and stability. In this regard, I personally disagree that teenagers are more
influenced by anyone else than their friends.
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