▶ Topic : Some people think that parents should set strict rules for their children if they want them to succeed in life.
Others think that strict rules are not necessary for children to obtain sucess, Which do you think is better?
▶ Your Answer
It is a great worth to discuss whether the parents shoulld set strict rules for their children if they want them to succeed in life. The answer to this question varies greatly depending on people's perspective. However, i believe that the method that the parents should treat their children using strict rules to come off the world is not reasonable. I'll give two subsquent reasons to support my arguement.
To beign with, the parent's rules are outdated. In the contempoarary world, enormously lots of things has been changed for the short period in terms of cultural advancement and technological development. Actually, there are many situations that the valuable information in the past transforms the useless resources today. Numerously new indepsenable resources pops up in the society and the rather outdated information readily disappears. So their strict rules can not help the children succeed in this world with speedy changing. The long and short of it is that the use of stern rules as a means of making their children success tends to be archaic in terms of success. Let me explain my view on this. I'll take my personal experience as a example to clairfy what i mean. I have a friend, jackson who live in USA. There were lots of conflict between his parents and he because of his attitude. His parents ordered him to do more polite and humble, but he didn't comply thier rule. Rather he did more rebelious. What suprised me is that after graduation he became famous hip-hop singer and his unique individuality made him more popular.
On top of this, using the strict rules when in comes to treatin g their children rather makes their children more rebelious. Basically, almost all people tends to act freely based on their own attitude to the world. Adequate rule are necessary to live more productively or healtheir. However, the strict method that is over the limited level can cause harmful effect to their children's futrue life. Moreover, it can spoil the children. There was a survey conducted by a group of professor major in Siology In Korea University, with 200 inmates as a respondents. The purpose of the study was to figure out the correlation between the environment with stern rule and the possibility to be a crinimal. What they found was extremely intriguing. The overwhelming 85 % experienced a hard time in a family because of strict rules. There are high possibility that this made them the people who tend to violate the basic rule.
Taking the speedy changing society and harmful effect of the strict rules into consideration, i hold to my tenet that using strict rules can effect negative impact on their children.
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