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The lecturer asserts that the problem suggested in the reading can solve.
The lecturer asserts that there are solutions to the problems suggested in the reading .
This casts doubt on the reading’s points that rescuing reptiles from planned construction sites and relocating them to safer environments is not viable.
First, the lecturer maintains that moving reptiles to a new area can not bring about overpopulation.
He says that making new habitats or increasing capacity for them can solve problem about overpopulation. We can make some artificial rocks for reptiles and they do not have to compete for food or habitat.
This can solve the problem that reptiles can be suffered some starvation and overcrowding.
Second, the lecturer claims that relocating of reptiles cannot contribute to the spread of disease.
He says that spread of disease can be avoid if experts visit the place regularly. And we can remove some infected reptiles to any other area early enough.
This can solve the problem that relocation reptiles can spread disease to vulnerable one.
Finally, the lecturer points out that they can be injured and killed while they are being captured.
This method is a basic way to protect them. And if we place small water bowl in the bucket and some moss for their moisture, they never being fatal dehydration .
And this can solve the problem about dying from dehydration.
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