■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic : The writer of the reading passage and the professor of the lecture discuss whether the use of imperils caused damage on evergreen trees or not. The writer argues that the imperils did nothing with trees’ bad condition. However, the speaker raises specific counterclaims and points out why the herbicide was the main cause for the disaster on vegetation. (GREAT introduction!) To begin with, the lecturer argues that experiment of government focused on the impact of the herbicide on human or animal rather than plant, indicating that the those reports were unsuitable. This is in complete opposition made in the point to the reading passage, stating that it is safe because the US EPA had approved them with numerous experiments. Furthermore, the second assertion that not all part of the trees are badly effected, is refuted by the lecturer. He explains that the lower part of the trees are more distorted than higher which means contaminated water makes them ill. This is why the lecture contradicts the second idea of the reading passage. Finally, regarding for (regarding + 바로 명사 혹은 대명사가 옵니다) the last point of the effect of climate change, the writer of the reading passage argues that it was not the herbicide that affects (주어 동사 일치) trees but the severe weather fluctuation. The lecturer, however contends that change of the climate condition should not be involved because both older and new trees were damaged. |
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점수: 20/30
1. 각 문단 시작 전에 tab 버튼 눌러서 들여쓰기 해주세요.
2. 지금 introduction과 body paragraph의 분량이 비슷합니다.
당연히 잡으셨어야 할 증거들을 못 잡으셨다는 얘기입니다.
주어진 자료에서 최대한 증거를 많이 모으셔서 에세이에 많이 써주세요.
디테일이 부족하여 내용을 이해할 때 혼란스러울 가능성도 있기 때문입니다.
3. that절은 되도록이면 자주 쓰지 마시고 (오류 가능성 커짐)
문장을 짧고 간결하게 유지해주세요.
수고하셨습니다. *^^*