▶ Your Answer :
Without doubt, doing project plays a
significant role in student's daily lives in many of places where they work or
play. Some people think that doing project with other people is much more
effectively than doing it alone, while others do not believe this way. Both sides have their own
reasons to support their view. If I had to choose one, I would say that working
alone on projects is much more effectively than working together when they
received projects. This is because, students can reduce time and energy when
they do project alone. Moreover, group work is much more unfair than working
alone.
First of all, the group work needs much
more energy and time in doing projects. To be specific, each member has their own views about
projects and it requires much time for them to come together as make one view, which every member agree.
Moreover, they can meet lots of conflicts, which during doing projects. These
conflicts consume their energies and make hard to get good result. However,
when a student do projects alone, these problems would not be considered. For
example, when I was in high school, my history teacher often assigned group
projects. However, whenever we came together to do projects, we had hard time
because our views were different. I wanted to use a photography such as
historical objects, but my friend wanted to use a graph rather than a
photography. We could not narrow our gap, finally our projects made a bad
result. If I had did this project alone, I could have not only saved my time
and energies but also made a good result.
To sum up, I strongly believe that the
advantage of working alone far overweigh the advantage of working on group for
the reasons as I mentioned above. For these reasons, If I had to choose one, I
disagree the opinion that group projects are much more effectively than working
alone on projects.
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