▶ Your Answer :
The reading passage contends that
the advanced civilization of the Amazon cannot be supported by the fact that
the available evidence is insufficient. On the other hand, the lecturer brings
up several points that contradict this argument.
First, the lecturer argues that people of the Amazon could form of a vast
civilization despite of the dense jungle of Amazon. This is because images
which researchers have s restored shows
that there were roads and canal to pass through jungle. Therefore, they could
work together and build highly developed society. This casts doubt on the
reading passage’s claim that high concentration of vegetation in the Amazon
rain forests prevented people from building a civilization.
Second, according to a lecturer, not discovering sophisticated tools cannot
prove that the Amazon did not constitute an advanced society. The reason is
that recently discovery around the Amazon river shows ceramic vessels,
which are is very elaborate tools. This
counters reading passage’s assertion that the Amazon did not build a civilized
society because they lack sophisticated tools.
The final point made by the lecturer is that European expeditions do not verify
that no large civilization existed there. This is supported by the fact that
European expeditions into Amazon fail to prove large civilization in the Amazon
because the magnitude of there is too vast, which is
up to 5 kilometers square. Moreover, in the mid twentieth century, France
expeditions into Amazon discovered highly developed society. This refutes the
reading passage’s argument that European expeditions into the Amazon rain
forest shows that no large civilization existed there.
듣기를 많이 못들었어요 ㅠㅠ 점수 부탁 드립니다. 감사합니다.
Fair (22-23) 첫번째 본문 -명사 단/복수 동사와 수일치 시켜주세요. researchers 복수이므로 has-->have -같은 이치로 shows도 show 로 바꿔주세요.
두번째 본문 -vessels 복수이므로 is-->are
세번째 본문 -which 절에 동사 필요하므로 is 넣어주세요.
reading passage 의 argument 를 어떻게 refute하는지 좀더 디테일하게 써주세요. 둘의 차이점과 서로 어떻게 대조되는지 더 명확하게 써주세요. 어휘/문장력 괜찮습니다. 단/복수 수 일치 신경 써주세요.
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