▶ Your Answer :
In the reading passage there is
ample support for the author’s claim that carbon sequestration is effective way
to delay global warming.
However, the professor in the lecture gives several reasons
as a rebuttal to the author’s point.
First, the professor contends that increasing the amount of
phytoplankton is ineffective way. It is Ddue to the fact that plankton
doesn’t permanently increase. They need iron and nitrogen to grow, and as they grow up the amount of nitrogen would be
depleted. And finally the spur would be stopped. Also, according to a study, the plankton sequestrates very little CO2
compared to the amount
of deposited iron. This casts doubt on the reading passage’s claim that raising
phytoplankton would decrease CO2 level.
Next, according to listening comprehension, artificial
wetland stores carbon 23% less than natural one.
Moreover, it takes long time to build up artificial wetland and to do its
function. So it is late to develop artificial wetland to prevent global
warming. This counters the reading passage’s assertion that creating human-made
wetland can delay reducing CO2 to atmosphere by postponing decomposition.
Finally, the
professor argues that depositing CO2 can be also
problematic. It is Bbecause of Methane which is evolved when CO2 attaches
to coal. Methane also involves carbon as well. In addition, some CO2 can be released, not being attached to coal. This means
the total amount of CO2 might not be reduced at all. This refutes the reading
passage’s suggestion that catching CO2 and pumping them into coal mine would
lessen CO2 by CO2’s feature that when they meet coal, they attach to coal.
Fair (17-19)
서론 -서론은 한 문단으로 써주세요. 문장들 사이에 줄바꿈 하지 말아주세요. 첫번째 본문 -an ineffective way 혹은 그냥 ineffective로 끝내는 것이 적절합니다. -주어+동사 due to 주어+동사 혹은 Due to 주어+동사, 주어+동사. 형태의 문장들로 써야합니다. 따라서, It is (주어 동사) due to the fact that plankton~ 으로 써주세요. -and 등위 접속사 넣어야 문장, and 문장. 으로 문법적으로 적절합니다. -study 앞에 관사 a 혹은 the 필요합니다. -compared to the 가 맞는 표현입니다.
두번째 본문 -artificial wetland 단수이므로 store-->stores
세번째 본문 -deposing-->depositing 철자 오류. -which 절은 혼자 있을 수 없고 앞에 문장이 필요합니다. 따라서 주어+동사 가 필요합니다. 따라서 It is 를 앞에 넣어주세요. -수동태가 의미에 적절하므로 can released-->can be released 수동태는 항상 be 동사 필요합니다.
어휘, 문장력 많이 많이 연습하셔야 합니다. 문법 오류 많습니다. 내용면에서도 listening의 내용에 비해 reading의 내용이 적습니다. 둘의 글이 어떻게 대조되고 서로 어떻게 rebut 하는지 더 디테일하게 써주세요.
수고하셨습니다~~
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