▶ Your Answer : Opinions might be divided over whether infringe upon people's freedom is acceptable. People of various ages and from different walks of life may take diverse positions on the controversial issue. I side with the perspective that it is not justified to divest people's freedom for the following two reasons: social disorder and the fact that people who usually infringe upon people's freedom will go to jail
To begin with, if infringing upon people's freedom is acceptable, it will cause serious social disorder. Many people nowadays are living in a plausible reason. Opponents of my perspective claim that looting people's freedom is acceptable to obtain their gain. Advocates' claim might be reasonable enough on the surface. However, if we take a closer look at their contentions, the rationale for their assertions lacks logic in many ways. Moreover, my personal experience can definitely debunk their assertions. When I hang out with others in social online game, we generally make a group and collaborate with others to defeat boss. However, if one of members start to infringe upon other members, it will causes other member do this action successively. Therefore, the group will be disoriented. The same applies to most circumstance.
Besides, people go to the jail when they infringe upon people's freedom. In addition to my personal anecdote, many articles from different newspapers reaffirm my viewpoints. For example, a few weeks ago, I read an op-ed piece from the Korea Herald that is related to the topic. It describes the result of a survey, which was conducted by Seoul National University social science researchers with more than 500 people as respondents who had gone to the jail. Of the 500 people, over 80 percent answered that the reasons of their arrest were infringement upon others freedom. This clearly proves that people who make a habit of infringe upon others freedom will go to the jail.
As I mentioned above, based on the two reasons. I can conclude that infringement upon others freedom is fault action and this lead to negative result. Therefore, it is not acceptable.
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