▶ Your Answer :
In the lecture, the speaker claims that setting up franchise brand is not better than opening their own
business, which directly contradicts the suggestion of the reading passage that
own business is not lucrative for individual than a franchise. - 각 파트별 주장이 맞게 배치되었는지 확인해주세요.
The
lecturer claims that managing of a franchise from the established company has
to give up control ability. Franchise owner is not free about what to sell.
Because they are forced by mother company when they open franchise, they cannot sell anything freely. This casts doubt on the writer's positive belief that offering reliable
products by the company is assured by having franchise shop, where the mother company tests the quality of the product.
The
main argument presented by the speaker is that many owners are frustrated of
product advertisement. The cost of advertising is 6 percent of total income. It
is a pretty high portion of income. Furthermore, national promotion is mostly
not appropriate in their local, and owners of the franchise shops cannot promote individually. This cast
doubt on the writer's positive belief that the owner can save time and money of
advertising. - 좀 더 구체적으로 광고를 할 때 전국으로 하여 생기는 단점 (로컬 최적화가 안 된다) 를 설명해주세요.
Finally, the speaker insists that managing of
a franchise is not more profitable than having a business of one's own. For franchise, even though they do not
have any income, they should pay for a brand charge of services and systems.
These charges are so high that they cannot earn much money. This dissents the
point made by the writer that franchise managing is more secure because everything is set up and assisted continuously.
Writing 0–30 score scale: Limited (1-16) / Fair (17-23) / Good (24–30)
ADDRESSING TOPIC
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ORGANIZATION
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PROGRESSION AND COHERENCE
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LANGUAGE USE
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GRAMMAR
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LIMITED
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FAIR
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FAIR
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FAIR
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LIMITED
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각 카테고리별 SCORE: LIMITED / FAIR / GOOD
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