▶ Your Answer : Without doubt,
large field of view (어색한 표현입니다) is important part of our lives. Some people think that
universities and high schools should teach students specific careers and fields
instead of general subjects, while others do not. Both sides may have their own
reasons to support their views. If I had to choose one, I would say that
schools should teach general subjects to students. There are several reasons
and examples as follow. First of all, a
lot of fields of study enable students to broaden their perspective. They can realize
valuable experiences what that they have never known before. To be specific, through learning various kinds of subjects, they can obtain a diversity of knowledge and so it can
bring them about getting various points of views. For instance, when I was at in high school, it (무엇을 가리키는 것인지 알 수 없습니다) did not allow students to choose specific subjects and any expertise.
Even though I did not want to study because general subjects was were so boring, through
these various fields of study, I could expand my perspectives more and more. As
a result, I could realize that accumulating the foundation knowledge (어색한 표현입니다) have a
greatly influence on my future careers. So Thus, I believed that general subjects are
more necessary than specific fields of study.
Second, the
subjects for general education can also motivate students to prepare more about
their future expertise. This is because that they can give a shoot on various
kinds of fields, and so they can find their interests in some specific studies.
Due to these this process of gaining motivations, additional subjects for careers would
not be necessary to the students. In my case, I have faced too many liberal arts
at universities (어색한 표현입니다) when I was a freshman. Before that, I had had no interests in any
field of study for my future occupation. However, through the foundation year (어색한 표현입니다),
I could find some specific subjects which fit in my aptitude since I tried to
study all kinds of subjects. If it were not for that year Without the year that can learn a variety of fields,
I would never not have obtained any motivation.
In brief, I
firmly believe that the advantages of liberal arts far outweigh the merits of
learning about specific subjects for career and expertise for these reasons I
have mentioned above. All in all, the importance of experiences on many fields
cannot be underestimated in our lives.
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