▶ Your Answer : Some people might think students who graduated high school, should work before entering college. But I think after graduate graduation and before going to college is the best season to go to travel. Here are some reasons as to why.
First and foremost, students might have had a hard time for preparing the test to enter college. What I mean is, between graduating graduation and entering college is the best time to take a rest and release the stress. In my experience, I had a hard time while I was in high school. I always stayed in school all day from 8 am to 11 pm. It was hard time to teenager. I was always had a stress of the test and my parents always asking asked me about my test. Not only me, most of the students who are preparing to enter university or college have stress in study. So I always talk with my friends, when all school and test is finish, we go travelling together. Me and my friends were standing that a hard time with think about the travel. Finally, when we finish the test, we buy the tickets to go to Japan and after we graduate, we go to travel to Japan. At that time we were 20 years old, so we can go travelling more freely. It was really good time to go travel before entering the college.
Secondly, when we enter the college, we don't have a lot of time to go travel. When I was a teenager I saw that many adults who are working in company say said, go travel while you are young. So I thought, if I become a college students I can go travel when ever I can. But unfortunately, I realized that, students are as busy as workers. For From my friend's experience, she thought she can go to travel while she entered the college. But unfortunately, she needs to study hard to get high GPA and needs to prepare the for several tests that related to her major. So during the vacation vocation, she need to prepare test and go to part time job. She is having a hard time to work and study even though her school is on vacation vocation. I heard that she is now regretting that she didn't go to travel after graduating.
For this these reasons, I think students should go travel while they graduate high school and before enter the college.
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