▶ Your Answer : The lecturer argues that numerous theories
suggested by the reading passage are rife with holes and assumptions. This
contradicts the reading passage's claim that some theories about disappearance
of Diprotodon are reliable.
First of all, the lecturer suggests that a
theory that Diprotodon had an extremely low reproductive rate is problemetic.
This is because that numbers of offspring that female Diprotodon are able to
produce are not low at all. The lecture provides an example of Bear and Koala.
The speaker says that Koalas generate their species lesser than Diprotodon and
they still do not recognize as endangered animals. This casts doubt on the
reading passage's claim that one agreeable reason for the extinction of Diprotodon
is its low reproductive rate. The reading passage explains that the limited
number of offspring may influence its population growth negatively.
Secondly, the lecturer explains that human
actions did not put much effect to the amount of food available for Diprotodon.
Burning land actually led vegetation to grow thicker. This counters the reading
passage's claim that the Diprotodon was extinct due to insufficiency of food. Diprotodon
needs to intake food sufficiently to maintain their daily life.
Lastly, the lecturer asserts that the theory
of Diprotodon’s extinction by predators' attacks is less examined. This is
because that because of Diprotodon's huge proportion, there were only few
predators. Furthermore, the speaker claims that Diprotodon should be dead
earlier if its extinction is result of predator's existence. This contradicts
to the reading passage's claim that Diprotodon was dead because of predators.
This is because of their high weights, they could not hide or move rapidly.
점수: 22 리딩에 대한 정보가 많이 부족한 통합형 에세이입니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요한 부분을 차지하는 것 중에 하나는 한 주제에 대하여서 서로 다른 정보를 가지고 있는 리딩이나 리스닝이 어떻게 비교하고 반박을 하는 것인지를 보는 것 입니다. 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우에 있어서는 리스닝에 대한 정보는 잘 서술하였지만 리딩에 대한 정보는 한 문장만 서술하였습니다. 한 문장으로 끝내는 것 보다는 리스닝을 좀 더 반박할 수 있는 부분들을 더 서술하시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셨습니다. * 질문: 각 paragraph마다 엔터키를 쳐야하나요? 그리고 문장 시작 전에 띄어쓰기하는 것이 좋을까요?
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