▶ Your Answer : Some people think that teachers should let their students to choose books. However, in my opinion, it is better that teachers should select books for their students for the following two reasons. To begin with, teachers are experts in the field of the education, there is no one nobodywho knows more better about the education. Also, I think it is the obligation of teacher. Academic course is the most important things for students, because a good academic record will help students to get into a good university and eventually get a job. Good books and good academic records have a closer relationship. Since it is crucial to choose the best book for students, teachers should select their students' book. For example, when I was in high school, I got an English tutoring for a year. My tutor who graduated from the college of education always has recommended me good books. I learned many things about English effectively in a short time by using good books, eventually my English records in high school was always excellent. Also, it was helpful when I got into the University. (How?) It has such a huge influence on me that I believe that good books and good academic records have a closer relationship, teachers should select their students' book. In addition, if students select a wrong book which is not effective for learning, it is a waste of time. Time is gold for students because most students are living in a busy and hectic life, so saving time means they can do a lot more later. Even, they have a pressure about time management not only mentally but also physically. By choosing the best book through teachers, they can save a lot of time. Also, selecting the best book among the toomany books will be difficult and take too long time for students. For instance, when I was in college, a friend of mine started to study for NCS certificate on her own. (Explain it) She selected a book for examination herself. The thing was the book was so difficult for her and had too diffuse style to read. As a result, she spent too much time studying it to get certified through the book, and wasted time. This example clearly illustrates that if students select a wrong book which is not effective for learning, it is a waste of time. To sum up, since good books and good academic records has closer relationship, teachers who are experts about education should select their students' book. Moreover, if students select wrong book which is not effective for learning, it is a waste of time. In this regard, I firmly believe that teachers should choose books for two reasons I mentioned above.
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| 3 | 3 | Score | Fair 18-21 | - 문장을 반복하여 사용하지 말고, (예를 들면, effective for learning, waste of time, good books, academic records) 충분히 Paraphrase 하여 주세요. - Knowledge는 기본으로, book의 어떤 점때문에 궁극적으로 좋은학교에 들어갈 수 있었는지에 대해 상세히 스토리를 묘사하여 주세요.
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