Finally, it is stated in the reading that the arrival of European people could have caused sea cow's extinction. On the contrary, it is accentuated in the lecture that the population of sea cows were already quite small before the European arrived. To be more specific, the population had gradually declined since 100 years before they arrived.
Comment :
요약 단어 선택면에서 정확하지 않은 부분이 좀 있는 것 같아요. 실제 지문 내용과 대조해보면서 detail이 정확하게 정리될 수 있도록 답안을 다듬어주세요. 기본적인 글의 틀은 잘 잡혀 있으니 내용과 정확한 문장 구사에 유의하면서 연습하시면 좋을 것 같아요. 과거에 대한 추측표현이 중요한 지문이므로 시제 표현 꼼꼼하게 체크해주세요~ 수고 많으셨습니다~!
Integrated Writing Rubrics Score 2.5/5
A response at this level contains some important information from the lecture and conveys some relevant connection to the reading, but it is marked by one or more of the following :
- Although the overall response is definitely oriented to the task, it conveys only vague, global, unclear, or somewhat imprecise connection of the points made in the lecture to points made in the reading.
- The response may omit one major key point made in the lecture.
- Some key points made in the lecture or the reading, or connections between the two, may be incomplete, inaccurate, or imprecise.
- Errors of usage and/or grammar may be more frequent or may result in noticeably vague expressions or obscured meanings in conveying ideas and connections.