▶ Your Answer :
Given reading explains three possible
explanations about sudden demise of Angkor. However, professor disagrees with
those theories with her own reasons.
First, according to the professor, the
theory based on the plague cannot explain the civilization's disappearance.
This is supported by the fact that the epidemic was spreaded by the coastal
trade and in a result, affected many coastal cities. For the case of Angkor,
the inland city, this idea cannot be applicable.
Also she disputes the idea of water system,
because the examined water system was always not sufficient to offer water to
its whole population. With this evidence, she argues that this lack of water
cannot led the city to its fall, since it was natural to not have a water for
other 50% of its population.
Finally, the professor says that the
maritime trade mentioned in the passage cannot be a reason of sudden end of the
civilization. This is because that the civilization mostly depended on their
agricultural trade, not a marine product. Indeed, the city also could maintain
their economical influence even after the rise of those coastal cities due to
their luxurious goods.
Fair: 17~23 점수: 21 리딩에 대한 정보가 아예 언급이 되어 있지 않는 거 같습니다. 통합형 에세이에 있어서 중요한 부분을 차지하는 것 중에 하나는 한 주제에 대하여서 서로 다른 정보를 가진 리딩과 리스닝이 어떻게 서로 비교하고 반박하는 지를 보는 것 입니다. 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우에 있어서는 리스닝에 대한 정보는 아주 많이 나와있습니다. 하지만 리딩에 대한 언급은 아예 나오지 않습니다. 따라서 리딩에 대한 정보를 꼭 서술하시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셨습니다.
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