▶ Your Answer : The reading passage asserts that scientists suggest that there are three reasons why the narwhals have unique tusks which bulge from their head and are shorter than other toothed whales. However, the speaker totally refutes the passage, by stating that lots of experts contend that three causes which the narwhal has specific tusk have loopholes. To begin with, the lecturer says that their tusks are too weak to break the thick ice because they are usually only 10kilogram. In addition, the ice on the Arctic Ocean is very strong, so it is impossible to break the ice by using their tusks. This position is the opposite of the reading passage that most of the narwhals which live in the ocean usually use their tusks to break the ice because they should breathe fresh air. The reason why they can break the ice is the ice which is in the residence of the narwhals is weak enough to destroy. Second, in the lecturer, she says that lots of experts don't have seen their violent fighting in their life. This is because most of the narwhals are known as peaceful animals. This completely contradicts one of the points in the reading passage that male narwhals use their tusks to fight with other male narwhals. This gives rise to the tendency that male narwhales try to protect their place or female. Last, the speaker does not agree with the reading passage that their tusk can recognize lots of things such as the water temperature, water press, even particles in the water as a nerve. She states that using their tusk as a nerve is strange because a few female narwhals have tusk. If it were not for tusk to female ones, they would not recognize anything. In addition, lots of tusks which female narwhals have are longer than those of male.
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