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Some people think that there are more important periods than one’s twenties. However, in my opinion, it is the most valuable period in a person’s whole life. It can be said that golden time of one’s life is come when he or she is twenties.
To the beginning, we can do lot of things in twenties. They can earn money more than they were young, study to go to good university or college, or doing special experience such as travel what they couldn’t because they were not adults. According to Jung Ang Il Bo, one of the most renowned newspaper companies in South Korea, over 88.6% of twenties feel more free to do something they want to compare to when they young and 91.2% of over age-of-30 replied twenties have to make effort to do what they want. First study shows that teenagers have passions and purpose to do something they want, but they are still young to do themselves, and second study shows that after passing twenties, they cannot make chances to do what they want. Therefore, twenties in one’s life is the most worthy time to do something they want.
On top of that, one’s twenties are the time that he or she determines what they are going to be. Someone wants to study more and be a professor. Another people want to obtain his or her job and earn money earlier than their friends. When people became twenties, they should choose the dream what they can make possible because of the responsibility for their life. For example, one of my friends couldn’t tell me to what he really likes and what is he want to be. But when he and I became twenties and after both applied to university, he told me that he want to be mechanical engineer in South Korea. This example shows that when person became twenties, they determine what kind of person do they want.
In conclusion, the twenties are most important period in one’s life in two reasons; twenties are most valuable time in one’s whole life, and they determine what they are going to be because they obtain responsibility to their life. Therefore, the most important period of one’s life is twenties in no doubt.
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