■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Your Answer :
In the reading passage, there is ample support for the author's claim that petroglyphs must have had a specific purpose. However, the professor in the lecture gives several reasons as a rebuttal to the author's point. First, the professor contends that petroglyphs must have not been used for communication. In fact, even the tribes having hostile relationship create these type of pictures. In addition, many same images created by different tribes have various features (various -> 복수명사 수식). This means that tribes cannot communicate effectively through the picture. This casts doubt on the reading passage's assertion that petroglyphs were used for communication tools which warn others for danger ahead. Next, the professor argues that petroglyphs are different from other religious creations which are elaborate. These are crudely made and have a simple shape. If petroglyphs had been used for a religious purpose, these would be more intricate. This refutes the reading passage's suggestion that petroglyphs must have been used for ritual materials. Finally, the professor insists that these types of pictures must not have been used for just a recreation purpose. Ancient people's lives always had a practical side. For example, young boys at that time passed their time by fighting and hunting preys. This counters the reading passage's assertion that ordinary people drown petroglyphs to escape boredom. |
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점수: 24/30
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