■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words.
■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer

           Undoubtedly, charming appearance and fashion play a significant role in people's daily lives in many of places where they work or play. Some people think that appearance and fashion have more impact on success than one's ability, while others do not. If I have to choose one, I would say that ability is way more important than one's looks in terms of success. This is because there is a trend that the job is increasing which we do not have to meet people because of the invention of internet and as the society is getting more sophisticated and specialized, the importance of one's ability is growing in many business fields.

           First and foremost, there are increasing fields of business that people can achieve even if they do not face each other. Those kinds of job evaluate people not by one's appearance but by one's ability. For example, my brother is working for an online consulting company. The customers requested consulting of the problems in their businesses to the company and the company offered the solution to their customers in online. Since the company started to the business, they have not met customers directly even at once. All working processes are operated by electronic papers and the consequences of work are announced in online. As a result, my brother is evaluated only by his performance in the company.

           In addition, one's ability is getting more important because our society becomes more advanced and professional. Even in the business where people meet each other, the ability has more priority than appearance. For example, my friend's brother had injured his left leg when he served for national army. As a result, he has walked with a limp. However he was not depressed and stared to work as a dealer of used car. As a dealer, he met his customers face to face. He devoted himself to satisfy customers' demands. Finally, my friend's brother overcame his disadvantage in his looks and he won the title of most selling dealer in the company.

           In a nutshell, a significance of one's ability is increasing more than one's appearance because online businesses are growing. Furthermore, ability is the first priority in the specialized society. In this regard one's ability cannot be overestimated in the work performance.