- student, students 발음을 정확하게 해주세요. 발음이 애매하면 grammar에서 감점을 받으실 수 있습니다.
- advantaged 발음을 조금 더 정확하게 해주세요.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- will be free of charge for student.
→ will be free of charge for students.
- she thinks that more students will be advantaged by this announcement
→ she thinks that more students will benefit from this new policy
- because they have tight budget and they didn't attend the classes even though they want to know how to play tennis
→ because they have a tight budget, they could not attend such classes even though they wanted to learn how to play tennis.
- but now when it free of charge more students will attend the class without burden.
→ but now, because it will be free of charge, more students will be able to attend the classes without much burden.
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◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 요약이 잘 되어있습니다.
◆ Comments
- 발음과 페이스가 좋습니다.
- 문법에 신경을 더 써주시면 좋겠습니다.
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