◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- 틀린 발음은 없으나 전체적으로 톤이 조금 어색합니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- they can learn each other's sight (?)
→ they can learn to understand each other.
- learnt girls' perspective interacting with them in school.
→ learnt girls' perspective by interacting with them in school.
- they can met the lover
→ they can meet their boyfriends or girlfriends.
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 제시하신 이유들은 모두 적절하나 설명이 조금 부족한 것 같아요. 조금만 더 설명을 덧붙여주시면 좋을 것 같습니다. 예를 들어 all boys, all girls school과 비교를 하는 문장을 추가하는 것 - If boys study at an all-boys school they can feel uncomfortable in the future when they have to do work or interact with girls and this will lead to bad outcomes.
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