◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- woman 발음이 부정확합니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- do musical with
-> do the musical with
- if she do with new member
-> if she does it with the new members
- audiences will be confused about it
-> people can be confused about it
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 두 번째 이유에 대한 설명이 상대적으로 더 짧았던 것 같고 잘 되어있지 않았던 것 같아요
- it will be hard to reschedule ... people will be confused .. 이거를 rescheduling can be difficult and people could be confused about the date 이런식으로만 바꿔도 의미 전달이 더 잘 될 것 같아요.
Independent Speaking Rubrics Score: 3