◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- people, professor, for, health 발음을 정확하게 해주세요
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- he like to eating the chocolate
-> he likes eating chocolate
- he realize that
-> he realized that
- to eat the chocolate
-> to eat chocolate
- he decide to stop eating chocolate
-> he decided to stop
- whenever see the chocolate,
-> whenever he saw chocolate
- he never has eating chocolate since then
-> he has never eaten chocolate since then
같은 문장에 chocolate이 반복될 경우 대명사를 사용해주세요.
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 용어 정의와 예시 요약이 잘 되어있습니다.
- 마지막 문장이 많이 messy한 것 같아요. 그 부분만 수정하시면 좋을 것 같습니다.
Independent Speaking Rubrics Score: 3