◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- reading 발음을 더 길게 끌어주세요 [rea-]
- strategies 발음이 부정확합니다. 끝부분 발음에 특히 주의해주세요, 현재 발음은 strategists에 더 가깝습니다
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- helps appealing the products
-> makes the products more appealing
- explains about how TV program help toy to be selled
-> explains how TV programs can help toys to be sold
- advertised for those children
-> advertised to those children
- these are the illustration
-> these are the illustrations
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 요약이 매우 잘 되어있습니다.
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