I oppose to the university's plan to permit the eating of snacks in class.
First, this policy can make noises. To be specific, even soft sounds made by eating can distract students who study in class. So this plan does not help students who study in class at all.
Second, this policy can make the classroom dirty. To be specific, some students are likely to dump trashes or leave debris of snacks in class. So many students can find the classroom filthy, leading to making students uncomfortable.
For these reasons, I think that this plan is not a good idea.
* the eating of snacks 어색한 문장사용 유의해주셔야 합니다.
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