I prefer to eat fast food.
First, it is very delicious. Even though
some of ingredients that I hate are part of it, the other taste can cover it so
I can have nice meal if I eat fast food(말이 중구난방같습니다). Also the other ingredients which are
my favorite make wonderful favor that attracts people.
Second, it is convenient. It takes no
longer time to make and no longer time to eat, so it fits to modern people who
is so busy too make and eat their meals. Additionally, unlike the other types
of food, we can eat fast food on the road by holding it.
For above reasons, I prefer to eat fast food every chance I get.
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채점기준표 | 점수 | 첨삭 |
Fluency | - |
스피킹 파일을 넣으셔야 할 수 있습니다. |
Grammar | 2 | some of ingredients that I hate are part of it, 부분 어색합니다 no longer time이라는 말은 없습니다.... no longer은 더이상 하지 않는다는 뜻입니다. people 뒤엔 are이 와야죠 |
Contents & Ideas | 2 |
- fast food의 좋은점이 좋아하는 재료와 안 좋아하는 재료가 같이 있어도 맛있기 때문이다 인가요? 어귀가 맞지 않는 부분이 종종 보이네요 |
Perfection | 2 | 문장 자체가 어색합니다 |
Score | 10-15 | awkward sentences |